between darkness and light

retrieval of souls

dream revival… take me away…

a moon on the water… remorse in the beseech of the twilit dusk… remorse for my own imperfection… gaze in this flaw… limitless wishing for the return of time… I have been frozen in its ends… mourning for those that I have lost… my beloved… my self…

intertwined sorrowful bonds… i bleed in this time you call eternity… and if forever i bleed… then i will curse this time through this infinite instance…

this is not fate… this can not be… but if fate exists… then should i just lie down? should i remain motionless and wait for your so-called fate determine my finality… must i let it take over my being? or should i awaken to this nightmare… delusions… can fate be altered? or does it stand still in time carrying out a dreaded flair manipulating my very entity…

darkness still has me confined… who will reach my tormented soul as it dies a thousand deaths?

Fate project… take my hand and let us write in this eternity…

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  1. DENICE said, on May 11, 2008 at 12:04 pm

    nice post dude :p

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  2. canaceluana said, on May 11, 2008 at 12:06 pm

    ne~ …this is long

    sugoi…^^

    parang pumasok ako sa mundo mo hahaha

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  3. hrix said, on May 16, 2008 at 10:09 am

    aww..

    T.T

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  4. Protagonist said, on May 19, 2008 at 6:26 am

    focus. there’s an error. :)

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  5. keil einheart said, on May 19, 2008 at 10:59 am

    my self?

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  6. keil einheart said, on May 19, 2008 at 11:03 am

    katamad lang palitan…

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  7. Nisah-chan^^ said, on May 19, 2008 at 2:12 pm

    I think I’m goin’ to like your works Raito-kun wahaha!! Recovery.Revival.Retrieval. hmm..=)
    ^________________^

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  8. nicaneko said, on June 6, 2008 at 1:40 am

    a masterpiece should i say. nice work!

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  9. hrix said, on July 29, 2008 at 11:29 am

    see, i posted a comment oh.. its T.T… wahaha.. full of sense.. :)

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  10. hrix said, on July 29, 2008 at 11:31 am

    eni.. bahain ng comments ang retrieval.. :)

    moon on the water.. :) you really are mr.moon..

    but i’m the moon.. wag mang agaw :|

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  11. hrix said, on July 29, 2008 at 11:53 am

    look at the dictionary..
    look under the letter “T”
    Right after the word tomography..
    an adverb is defined for thee..

    ~hrix wahaha adik lang.. c:

    any.. don’t know kung pare pareho sa dictionary yan e.. i used collins pocket dictio haha (good thing inuwi ko kanina galing school or else…)

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  12. hrix said, on July 29, 2008 at 11:58 am

    eni.. that kalokohan before this is really for this work.. hehe :D

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  13. Mikan said, on July 31, 2008 at 1:03 pm

    Seeking oneself in a vast eternity…going against fate… Lost… Sadness… Darkness… No one can change the past… live with it… create a future for happiness’ sake… Hope exists for those who are willing to start a new beginning.. XD

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  14. hrix said, on August 3, 2008 at 4:44 am

    the past will remain futile… regret and pain and misery and tears .. mind not.. mind not… cast away your fecklessness.. darkness.. remorse.. shatter them.. you’ll bleed.. but then.. mind not.. mind not… do hope for tomorrow.. the past can’t be rewritten.. the pen’s ink has already depleted.. but then.. mind not.. mind not..

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  15. Anito said, on May 8, 2009 at 3:29 am

    i bleed in this time you call eternity… and if forever i bleed… then i will curse this time through this infinite instance…

    I love thatl ine!

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